Bear Naked by R.J. Eliason

I would really like to give this book a 2-1/2 rating. While I do feel the overall story has potential, there are some elements that could be improved to make the story more compelling.

Bear NakedTitle: Bear Naked
Author: R.J. Eliason
Series: Bear Naked Book 01
Publication Date: January 1, 2014
Genre: Young Adult Urban Fantasy
Source: Review copy provided by the author

Publisher’s Description: Amanda Burnson is a typical teen with all the typical problems: excess weight, struggles with body odor, random people trying to kill her . . . oh, and her boyfriend just might be a werewolf.

At seventeen, Amanda, who has been raised by her neo-pagan uncle, has more friends at the local Renaissance faire than at her high school. Most of her summers are spent at faires, festivals, and Aunt Maggie’s farm.

There is something new going on in the heart of America, in the small Iowa town that Amanda calls home. The whole town is changing—a tough way to begin a school year. New kids alongside the old; new attitudes colliding with the usual annoying old ones; menacing new faces alongside comforting ones. . . things will never be the same once this brew is boiled.

Possible spoilers beyond this point.


Fickle Fiona says…

Fickle_Fiona_100I appreciate where the author was headed with this story, though I feel it lacked some things in the way it got there. The first ⅔ of the book was extremely slow paced with no build up to the climax of the story. Secrets are revealed and fairly instantly accepted by other characters, without much display of reaction. It has the feel of an author writing a series for the first time and having trouble with pacing and development. I am interested to see if the second book has a better feel to it, now that she is invested in the story, and to see how the story develops.

I applaud the inclusion of vast differences of characters the author chooses to include. After looking into her history more, she appears to be an LGBT advocate, which is commendable. She incorporates characters into the story that are homosexual, as well as genderqueer – a term I was not familiar with before reading this book. That being the case, I feel like there was little outright explanation as to what exactly that meant. There were hints throughout the book that I eventually picked up on, but it would have been nice to know more earlier on. I originally felt like these were token characters. put in the book just to say she was being inclusive. Later in the story, I discovered they play a larger role; however, the genderqueer concept still has no major impact.

badge2v4The same can be said of the main character’s Pagan belief system. There are scenes in the book that are incredibly descriptive but sadly unnecessary. I would have found it more intriguing had the author gone into detail on scenes of the Pagan rituals and celebrations. With both the genderqueer and the Pagan lifestyles, I feel like the author could have taken advantage of this platform to educate people that are less informed on these topics.

Once finished, I can say that I enjoyed the overall story that the author was going for. Despite the basic writing style and lack of drama to keep the book moving, I never got to a point where I wanted to stop reading. It somehow managed to hold my attention and kept me turning the pages to see where it was going.

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Posted on July 30, 2015, in 2-Meh, Contemporary Fantasy, Female, Fickle Fiona, Review, Young Adult and tagged . Bookmark the permalink. 1 Comment.

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